a family's quest for Adventure at sea and on land
I'd give the writing 9.5 out of 10! Excellent description,Carmen - so exciting to see the whales feeding. (poppa says he agrees)
I love the word choice in this piece! I could totally see and feel the scene of the whales gaping mouths scooping up krill!
Nice job Carmen, I could see it! Beautiful handwriting also. Hugs to you. Kimmer
I'd give the writing 9.5 out of 10! Excellent description,Carmen - so exciting to see the whales feeding. (poppa says he agrees)
ReplyDeleteI love the word choice in this piece! I could totally see and feel the scene of the whales gaping mouths scooping up krill!
ReplyDeleteNice job Carmen, I could see it! Beautiful handwriting also. Hugs to you. Kimmer
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